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Storyboard (6th Variant)
added the suggested panning shot of town. Will be reworked on the sequence. A lot more can be done with the bad arm that wasn't explored. Tension during the stapler gun shooting can be emphasized with more cuts to and fro from Caitlin to Hand and back again. Revise how the BadHand gets the stapler. It is not convincing enough. Make cottier be doing something instead of coincidentally just being at the right place at the right time.






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